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~Flow-

Y'ever wonder how it looks,
The creek in the midst of a flood?
The rain falls so endlessly...
Mother Nature's out for blood

That morning brought no return...
We search and the rain dies down
A day and a half of heartache,
Just find them safe n' sound...

Tossed and thrown,
Up stream and down stream...
Chilled to the bone,
Drenched in a hellish dream...
Whatever happened will never been known...

Road blocks up for miles,
The found a shirt and bike...
The flow still hides the bodies
Somewhere on this pike...

Tossed and thrown,
Up stream and down stream...
Chilled to the bone,
Drenched in a hellish dream...
Whatever happened will never been known...
Bodies found...

Lay down...
Sleep young fallen one
And soar...
On wings so well deserved
Live on...
The memory remains
Now rest... now rest... (x4) ~
©2007-2008 ~xKael88
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A eulogy for young boys I wasn't too familiar with.
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*Aluthien:iconAluthien: Nov 27, 2007, 4:06:36 PMFlagged as spam
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I always liked this one.
R.I.P Tommy & Mike. :raincloud:

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If a day goes by without my doing something related to photography, it's as though I've neglected something essential to my existence; as though I had forgotten to wake up.
~Richard Avedon
~xKael88:iconxKael88: Nov 28, 2007, 12:09:40 AM
Indeed.. It was kind of thrown together quick, but it seems perfect how it is.

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